The Rough-Face Girl by Rafe Martin

6/26/2015

jared

6/30/2015 03:09:04 am

Rough face girl
By Jared
I give rough face girl 5 stars because it has a good ending. In the beginning the sisters are hard hearted to the rough face girl and she is soft hearted. Next the sisters talk to the dad. The sisters said give me new necklace and buckskin and I need new beaded moccasins I’m going to marry the invisible being. In the middle the sisters is going to the wigwam. The sisters can’t see the invisible being. In the end the rough face girl marry the invisible being. It’s different from Cinderella because there is no invisible being in the original book.

alex

6/30/2015 03:20:09 am

well i gave 3 star.s

mathew

6/30/2015 03:38:46 am

but how is it a good ending

itzel

6/30/2015 03:34:40 am

Rough Face Girl by RAFE MARTIN
By itzel
Poor rough face girl she got brand by the fire .rough face girl do the fire not her stepsister. The stepsister want to marry the invisible Being But that could not see the invisible being. Just rough face girl can see invisible being. The rough go to the wigwam she want to marry him. And the sister of the invisible being said what is bow made of? She said great curve of the Rainbow she said yes! And the sister said what is his sled made of? The spirit road the milky way of stars. And she marry the invisible being. She go in the pond and she got her black hair back. And that marry. In my opinion is give 5 stars to rough face girl because her stepsister no marry him because that means to her. Rough face girl is kind not means. And it not has bad word for kid.

aidan

6/30/2015 05:56:58 am

Rough face girl Aidan
I give rough face girl 5 stars because it has a good ending. In the beginning the sisters are hard-hearted and the sisters make Rough face girl like a slave because she got burned and she really wants to marry the invisible being. She went to get clothes from her dad and he didn’t have the nice clothes that the stepsisters had. She had to make her own clothes. She went to see the invisible being in the sky and went on a boat. In the end the Rough Face Girl married the invisible being. It’s different from the original Cinderella book because she does not go to a ball and there is no fairy godmother. She had a dead mother but no dead father.

Joaquin

6/30/2015 06:28:28 am

The Rough Face Girl by Joaquin

In the story the rough face girl sisters told the girl to tend to the fire then the sisters told
Their father and ask for some necklaces and some moccasins and a buckskin Dresses we are going to
Marri the invisible being then they went to the invisible beings sister and said why did you come next the sister of the invisible being told the rough face sisters that if they really sine here brother and
They did not sine her brother finally the rough face girl went to the invisible beings sister and the invisible beings sister told the rough face girl if she really sine the invisible being and told her a few
Words and she knew the Invisible Being finally the invisible beings sister let the rough face girl in the
Entrance finally the invisible being and the rough face girl got married and livid happy ever after!

The Rough-Face Girl by Rafe Martin

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